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Walt Whitman's ten-line free verse poem, "A Noiseless Patient Spider" combines metaphor and metaphysics to convey a sense of meaning and wonderment. Whitman draws parallels between the mysterious arachnid and the equally nebulous human soul. The action of spinning and weaving webs becomes a workable metaphor for Whitman's spiritual conception of the human desire to understand the cosmos and our place within it. The spider builds webs that link disparate places; so does the soul. The soul forges bridges that connect people, time, space, and ideas. The spider itself is unaware of the splendor and beauty it creates, for its web serves simply as a way to catch food. It does not realize that its lure provides a visual representation of the mystical nature of the soul.

Whitman inspires healthy self-awareness with his deep observations of the spider and its web. He witnesses in the miraculous creature his own soul and asks us to see our individual reflections therein. One could meditate for hours on the spider metaphor, for this musing is fairly straightforward. However, in only two verses, Walt Whitman evokes a sense of wonder that transcends the language he employs. By carefully crafting his lines to bridge the gap between the concrete subject of the "noiseless, patient" spider and the abstract soul, Whitman eases the reader into his musings. The first stanza stands alone as a meditation on observation: the poet seems to revel in the simple appreciation of the spider's wondrous existence. That this creature can create silk from within its body is as stunning as childbirth or any act of creation. Repeating the word "filament" three times in line 4, and combining that with the powerful verb "launch," Whitman does clarify the significance of the biological spider, removed from its metaphorical meaning.

The poet reserves the entire second stanza for the metaphor but succeeds by not mentioning the word "spider" once there. The connection is clear: the spider weaves physical webbing while the soul weaves a symbolic one. Whitman notices how the spider stands alone and isolated on a promontory amid a "vacant, vast surrounding," (line 3). Likewise, the soul stands "surrounded, in measureless oceans of space," (line 7). Both the spider and the soul seem to be noiseless and patient within their environment.

Whitman cleverly hints at the connection between the mundane acts and materials of the spider and the ethereal realm of the soul. The use of the word "filament" suggests "firmament," though he never uses the latter word. However, the soul seeks to connect the heavenly spheres, to touch them and to understand them. The bridge that the soul forms with its "gossamer thread" is like the physical bridge that links corner to corner on a cobweb (line 10).

Both stanzas contain exactly five lines each, making "A Noiseless Patient Spider" even and balanced like its central metaphor. Neither Whitman's musings on the nature of the soul nor his observations of the spider dominate the poem. Key words and symbols like solitude, creation, exploration, and bridge building become the keys to grasping the deeper feeling of Whitman's metaphor. From within the depths of the arachnid body emerges a silken filament; from within the depths of the human soul emerges a "gossamer thread," (line 10). The spider "launches," "unreels," and "tirelessly speeds" its web (lines 4-5), while the soul "ventures," "throws," and "flings" its metaphorical thread (lines 8, 10). Whitman avoids repeating verbs in his comparison of the spider with the soul but nevertheless clearly connects the two.