Privacy, Security, Whistleblowing
[Surveillance is a necessary evil to prevent terrorist attacks from happening.]A [For example, the secret "PRISM" effort saved New York City's subways from a 2009 terrorist plot led by a young Afghan-American, Najibullah Zazi.]
A = Main Argument
Surveillance is a necessary evil to prevent terrorist attacks
B = Level
The secret PRISM effort saved New York City's subways in 2009 from a terrorist plot.
Claim B. is Level 1 and supports Argument A, which is the main argument.
[Surveillance violates the right to privacy by citizens worldwide.]A [Of course, citizens already release their private data to government and companies alike, whether it be the tax office, health services or banks.]B [However, in all those cases, we can decide for ourselves which information is shared, so our privacy is not violated, whereas the government surveillance schemes sweep up information without our explicit permission.]C
C = Main Argument
Decide for ourselves what information to share + government surveillance sweeps without explicit permission.
B = Level 1
Surveillance violates the right to privacy by citizens.
A = Level 1
Citizens release private date to government and companies.
C is the main argument. The main argument shows that both Claim A and Claim B. occur independently at the same time. Neither Claim is dependent on the other, neither Claim restricts or facilitates the other Claim. Hence, both Claims are Level 1.
[Surveillance on the scale revealed by Snowden should be stopped.]A [Surveillance should be stopped because it can be abused by government to get back at its critics.]B [Given the past track record of U.S. Government, this is not entirely unlikely. For example:]C [Firstly, the department of Homeland Security did conduct in the past inappropriate surveillance of protesters associated with Occupy Wall Street.]D [Also, the Justice Department's inspector general found that the F.B.I. monitored a political group because of its anti-war views.]E [Finally, a former C.I.A. official says that the agency gathered information about a prominent war critic in order to discredit him.]F [Then again, potential abuse would probably stifle any government initiative.]G
G = Level 1
Potential abuse would probably stop government initiative
B = Level 1
Surveillance can be abused to get back at critics.
A = Main Argument
Surveillance on the "Snowden scale" should be stopped.
C = Level 2
There is a government track record of abuse.
F = Level 3
CIA gathered data to discredit a prominent war critic.
E = Level 3
FBI monitored anti-war political group.
D = Level 3
Inappropriate surveillance of Occupy protestors by HS.
There are three Level 3 Claims: Claim D, Claim E, and Claim F. All three Level 3 Claims support the Level 2 Claim C. since they provide an example of the more general Claim C. There are two Level 2 Claims: Claim B. And Claim G. Claim B. supports the main argument. A is the main argument. Claim G. does not support the main argument. Claim G. is counter to Claim B.
Snowden claims that he told two supervisors and multiple others about his findings, and that he used internal channels of dissent to do so (Gellman, 2013). If this claim by Snowden is accurate, then his actions do quality as whistleblowing for this property. However, a NSA spokesperson stated that the department had not found any evidence that Snowden attempted to bring the finding to the attention of others as he claimed. If this statement from NSA is accurate, then Snowden's actions do not constitute whistleblowing according to this property.
Gellmann, B. (2013, December 24). Edward Snowden, after months of NSA revelations, says his mission's accomplished. The Washington Post. Retrieved May 27, 2014.
In January 2014, Snowden claimed to have "made tremendous efforts to report these programs to co-workers, supervisors, and anyone with the proper clearance who would listen" (Cassidy, 2014). Snowden further stated that reactions to his disclosure varied widely but no one was willing to take any action. In March 2014, Snowden reiterated his early testimony saying that he had reported "clearly problematic programs" to ten officials (Cassidy, 2014).
Cassidy, J. (2014, January 23). A vindicated Snowden says he'd like to come home. The New Yorker. Web. 27 May 2014.
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