The hard work that I have put into building a solid academic resume reflects my character and my dedication to self-improvement. It is imperative, however, that am able to receive some assistance in order to continue pursuit of my educational goals. I am simply not able to fund the pursuit of my dreams on my own at this point. Thus, I feel that a scholarship is not simply something that I would like to have, it is something that I need to have. I see my university education as a stepping stone to a brilliant career. My interest in business and economics will take me to interesting professions. As I make my contribution to the betterment of the world, I will be an outstanding corporate citizen and a stellar representative of my alma mater. The debt of gratitude that I will owe as a result of your support today will be repaid tenfold...

I truly believe that I can make an invaluable contribution to campus life, my fellow students and the school, not just for four years but beyond as well. Life is to me about building relationships and strong ties. Your generosity in awarding me this scholarship will never be forgotten.
I believe that this university is right for me. The campus, the faculty and the reputation all lead me to this conclusion. Other schools simply do not offer the same compelling package and perfect fit. It is my hope that I will be able to receive this scholarship, which in turn will allow me to contribution to your esteemed institution.