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There is no empirical test being proposed for the paper. The a priori conclusion of the paper, in the absence of research, begs serious questions about the validity of this research. If you think you already know the answer, why ask the question?
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In terms of style, the proposal sounds disjointed, and the giant paragraphs do not help. Ideas are somewhat developed, however. There are some minor grammar/spelling errors, such as capitalizing 'gold standard' and 'fiat money.' Slang phrases like "blown away" should be avoided. Avoid first person if possible. Citations need to be improved dramatically, using proper APA style. The lack of proofreading is apparent. The style needs to be tighter as well, to improve professionalism. Stick to the facts.
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There are not nearly enough citations in the body of the work. Use APA style in the reference page for consistency.
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The report thus far does not demonstrate critical and unbiased thinking. The conclusions already exist before the research has been conducted, which creates bias. That...
The conclusions should be drawn directly from the research and the research needs to be thorough, unbiased, and focused. Better sources will help here -- there are credible views on both sides of this argument. My advice is to find them and use them.
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What I would offer is that right now this is not a proper research paper. It is a persuasive essay, and unfortunately one that really only appeals to pathos, that people should be outraged. Even a rhetorical piece about moral rightness needs logos and ethos, and right now the sources aren't credible and the arguments are not sophisticated enough. If this is to be an unbiased research paper, stick to something that can be empirically tested, not a question of morality and nothing involving speculating. You can test something like "Americans lack basic knowledge about the Federal Reserve" and then ask a number of people questions to test that knowledge. Then you have something that can be empirically tested and can be produced without bias.
Rather than propping up "bad blood" and allowing the "illusion" of wealth to continue to be fostered, the Federal Reserve should allow the market to flush out the "bad blood" and operate the way it is intended. Conclusion In conclusion, the good that the Federal Reserve does is to monitor economic policy, encourage maximum employment and long-term stability. The way it does so, however, especially in times of crisis such as
It is also worth noting that the Fed must understand how the relationship between its actions and the outcomes changes under different circumstances. For example, open market transactions put more money into the economy; they do not imply that spending will increase. Thus, more money in the economy will not necessarily lead to more growth, lower unemployment or higher inflation, even though the typical relationship is that they will. The
Federal Reserve There are three purposes of money: to act as a medium of exchange; as a store of value and as a unit of account (Helfield, 2011). Money as a medium of trade facilitates exchange, in that the counterparties are able to trade money for goods, instead of trading goods for goods, which is more complicated. As a store of value, money does not deteriorate (save via inflation), which is
Federal and State Websites State/Federal Research Project State Websites Employment Training Panel Employment training panel (ETP) is a business and labor supported Californian State agency, which funds the vocational training costs. ETP clearly outlines its programs, and can only involve in fund provision for training employers who are subject to the payment of Employment Training Tax. The eligible entities in this case may include single employers who are subject to the UIT (unemployment insurance
Federal Reserve System is. The Federal Reserve System The Federal Reserve serves as the central bank of the United States. It was founded by the Congress in 1913 to serve the function of provide the nation with a secure and committed monetary and financial system. Today the Federal Reserve holds the responsibilities in four areas: (1) conducting the nation's monetary policy; (2) supervising and regulating banking institutions and protecting the credit rights
Alan Greenspan's testimony starts with a comparison between the state of the U.S. economy in July 2004, time of his present testimony, and the state of the economy in February 2004, the time of his previous testimony in front of the U.S. Congress. In February 2004, the main problem of the U.S. economy, as identified by Greenspan, was the fact that the company's increase in income and net profits were related