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Admission to MSN Education Program

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Admission Letter to Wright State University

Thank you in advance for your consideration of my essay for admission. I am grateful for this opportunity and I look forward to becoming a worthy participant in your Master of Science in Nursing program.

Presently I am proud of the fact that in May, 2012, I obtained my Bachelor of Science in Nursing from Ohio State University. Moreover, I am full of pride and sincerely humbled by my new assignment to teach as an adjunct clinical instructor at Rhodes College in Memphis, beginning in January, 2012. I am fully familiar with Rhodes College because I served as a preceptor for final quarter and semester students beginning in May 2009 -- and I will continue in that position through December 2012.

These opportunities have come my way because of my life-long commitment to excellence and thoroughness in everything I have done.

Indeed, in my adult life I have consistently zeroed in on one salient goal -- to achieve the credentials and experience needed for a meaningful career in education at a high level. In part I have already achieved this goal because I have served as an educator at Lima Memorial Hospital and found…… [Read More]

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Admission to This Cooperative Program

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Of the available positions, I am most interested in those dealing with human resources, specifically recruitment, training, and development. I believe that my educational and professional experience will make me an asset to any of these positions. First, I am an MBA student with a constriction in organizational leadership, which has prepared me for a wide variety of positions in human resources. Perhaps more important is my work experience. I have worked as a recruitment analyst, which gave me practical experience in the HR field. In that position I was responsible for company-wide recruitment procedures, including preparations of job announcements, employment contracts, the candidate interview process, and candidate evaluation guidelines. Because I already have some practical experience directly relating to the three positions in which I am interested, I feel that I would be an excellent addition to…… [Read More]

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Inappropriate Hospital Admission Raising Health

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Therefore, a basis is formed on which to reduce the inappropriate admissions after the correct rates are determined (Restuccia, Shwartz, Ash, and Payne, 1996).

The connection between hospitalization rates and the inappropriateness of the admissions cannot be confirmed. A study of adults revealed that there was no link between the rates of hospitalization and the inappropriateness of the admission while a similar study conducted with no age limits produced contrary results. Three procedures of coronary angiography, upper gastrointestinal endoscopy, and carotid endarterectomy were used in another study to find out the relationship between the varying admission rates and their appropriateness (Restuccia, Shwartz, Ash, and Payne, 1996).

It was revealed that there was more inappropriateness in high-use areas. When this study was repeated for a small area, the outcomes were quite different. This showed that inappropriateness cannot be used as a basis to find out the cause for the differing hospitalization rates (Restuccia, Shwartz, Ash, and Payne, 1996). These studies have two major limitations. First and foremost, mainly the target of the studies has been to investigate large geographical regions that might have neglected the basic factors present in the small areas, the localized patterns of medical practices and the varying…… [Read More]


Apolone G., Fellin G., Tampieri a., et al. (1997). Appropriateness of hospital use: Report from an Italian study. European Journal of Public Health Vol. 7, 1997 No. 1

Campbell J. (2001). Inappropriate admissions: thoughts of patients and referring doctors. JR Soc Med 2001;94:628-631.

Chopard P., Perneger T.V., Gaspoz J.M., Lovis C., et al. (1998). Predictors of inappropriate hospital days in a department of internal medicine. International Journal of Epidemiology 1998:27.513-519

Chopard P., Gaspoz J.M., Lovis C., et al. (1998). Predictors of inappropriate hospital days in a department of internal medicine. International Journal of Epidemiology, Volume 27, Number 3, June 1998, pp. 513-519(7).
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Njit Admission Applying for a Better Future

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NJIT Admission

Applying for a Better Future

The pieces that form the buildings in which we lead our daily lives are made from such inspiring creativity. Whether it is architecture or interior design, the most beautiful constructions, inside and outside, are those that we admire most. I have loved studying geometry since I was a little girl. Sharp corners, semi-circles, all of these figures fascinated me as pieces of a puzzle. I saw these pieces combining to form buildings, and designs inside of buildings that enhanced a certain construction's beauty. I have, thus, been fascinated by architecture and interior design for as long as I know, and as soon as I found that the New Jersey Institute of Technology has a wonderful Architecture and Interior Design Program, I knew that this was a destiny for me.

My family has always supported me in my decisions and my passion. This is my chance to give them something in return for all the support, which they have offered.

My inspiration for applying to this program to continue my passion is thus also my family, and especially my mother. I would like to pursue my studies to offer my mother a better life,…… [Read More]

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Harvard Admission Qs as I

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2. What have you learned from a mistake?

Of course, even as I speak with great pride of my accomplishments, I can quite easily recall some of my more humbling moments. Without question, and especially in the complex and fast-paced world of global finance, one is bound to make a mistake.

And quite often, if one is to truly learn a lesson, the mistake might very well have been fairly huge and costly. Certainly mine was.

While working at Deutsche Bank, I in advertently placed an incorrect order when buying shares for a client. Naturally, when the client encountered the mistake in his account, he became very angry and expressed this anger to his Relationship Manager at the bank. When I learned of the incident, I was horrified of course. But I immediately approached the Manager and explained that it was my error which had triggered the client's anger. I called the client right away, explained that I had made a mistake and apologized profusely. To my surprise, the client was more than willing to accept my apology. He told me not to worry, that he understood that mistakes happen, and that he appreciated my willingness to take responsibility.

This…… [Read More]

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Nursing Through Admission Into the

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Education is an aspect of my life that is taken very seriously, therefore, it seems imperative to attend a school that will provide the necessary tools to excel further, and know that I have received one of the best educations possible. It is important that I be able to give back to my community and make a positive impact on the world no matter how big or small. It has always been important for me to do work that allows me to help others, and nursing will provide that opportunity that would not be possible without furthering my education. Therefore, nursing school is the next step in an important venture into reaching the steps laid out in my education and career goals. I intend to give nursing school the same dedication and effort that I give all aspects…… [Read More]

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Data Analysis on the Rate of Heart Failure Admission

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Heart Failure Admission

The project carries out the CCIP (Chronic Care Improvement Program) to alleviate the heart problem of people suffering from heart failure. The time frame of the program is within 6 months between January 1, 2015 and June 30, 2015. The total population consist of 1,606 people, and out of all the 1,606 target population enrolled for the program, 0 is the numerator and the denominator is 45. Thus, 45 participants are eligible to receive program interventions. Based on the results of the PBP (Plan Benefit Package), the inpatient PBP 002 diagnosed for heart failure are 1,606 target population and the care management declined by 5% in 2014, representing a total reduction of 5% compared to 7% reduction 3 years ago.

In the additional intervention of the program, the target population selected are 1,606, where 1 meets the inclusion criteria and 11 participants are eligible to receive the program intervention. The goal of 7% reduction achieved 3 years ago was not achieved in 2015 since 5% reduction was achieved in 2015.

Added intervention reveals that 11 PBP 002 members of the CCP population has been diagnosed for the heart failure (HF)who have been enrolled within the first 6…… [Read More]

The Study C discusses the rate of the Inpatient Admission for PBP 017 who have been diagnosed with heart failure. Patients accepted the care management declined from 4.57% in 2014 to 3.36% in the first 6 months of 2015 between January 1, 2015 and June 30, 2015. The target population is 20,021 where the numerator is 2, who are the member meeting the inclusion criteria. However, the denominator is 27, which are the people eligible to receive program intervention. Compared to the goal of 2 years ago, the results represent a total reduction of 1.21%. Nevertheless, the results of 2014 was better than the results obtained in the first 6 months of 2015 because the admission rate increased in 2015 than 2014. The results reveal that the benchmark was not achieved because it was anticipated that the admission rates of 2015 will decline to what was achieved in 2014. The added intervention revealed that out 27 Members who did not have a dispensing event for the beta-blocker, the records was able to review 8(30%) and 2 Member had LVEF of less than 40.


The program was carried out within first 6 months of 2015 between January 1, 2015 and June 30, 2015. The target population is 20,545, where the numerator is 7 and denominator is 638. The program reveals the rate of Inpatient Medicare Advantage Member who have been diagnosed for heart failure. The Inpatient admission was reduced by 2.19% in 2014 based on the CMS annual report, however, the rate of admission reduced to 1.10% in 2015 between January 1, 2015 and June 31, 2015 representing a 1.09% reduction since last years compared to 5% admission rate reduction in the last 3 years. However, 2012 base line was 16.71%. The results reveals that 2015 benchmark was not met because a reduction of admission was 1.10% in 2015, which was lower than admission rates in 2014, 2013, and 2012.
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Institution for Admission Program Degree or Course

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Institution for Admission

Program, degree or course of study

Mental Health Masters Program Admissions Essay

Mental health should be an important issue for each and every one of us. Mental health is directly related to physical health as well. My life experience and my professional experience has proven to me be repeatedly and very clearly the necessity for strong mental health. My interest in my helping my community and helping people live better lives inspire me to pursue mental health at the graduate level.

I have spent a great deal of time working in an extremely active emergency room in New York City. Emergency rooms in general are stressful, and to couple that kind of work environment in a city like New York, which can have more than 10 million people in it who speak a huge variety of languages, coming from every culture imaginable, can increase the potential stress level exponentially.

I am lucky that I have experience as a naval officer. The navy prepared me for a career in mental health without my awareness. In the U.S. Navy, I learned a great deal of self-discipline. I learned about what it means to work as a team and the…… [Read More]

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Contemplate My Admission to Your

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I know whatever major I choose, my first priority is to help others and make a difference in their lives.

I feel I have a lot to offer to your university in my attitude, involvement, and dedication. I am a very sensitive person because of my sister and her condition. She has had many medical problems (including open-heart surgery, heart failure, and several battles with pneumonia). She is an inspiration to me, and my family rejoices in all of her successes. This has made me more open to others, and to understand those who are different, as well as those who fit in. I feel this will make me a better, more compassionate student and peer.

My sister has taught me more than compassion and sensitivity. Despite her health problems and situation, she still holds down a part time job at McDonald's, and is always positive and upbeat. As my older sister, she is a role model for me, and I feel the need to protect her at times, which has also taught me responsibility and strength. I feel I will be a responsible and dedicated student with my sister's dedication in sight throughout my university years. I am serious…… [Read More]

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Accept My Application for Admission

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For 2006 and 2007, I have been accepted into the Explorer Program at Mt. Carmel East Hospital. During this time, I also participated on my high school soccer team. I feel I have experience and enthusiasm to offer the medical program and a degree from your institution would be my stepping-stone into the career I have always seen for myself.

I hope to complete my education as soon as possible and obtain a position in a pediatric facility where I can help other children that suffered as I did when I was young. The nursing staff helped me through that difficult time, and I hope to do the same for other children. I also hope to become involved in some type of pediatric cancer research. I feel I can best accomplish these goals with a degree from your institution, as its reputation for medical education is well-known and respected throughout the country. I hope you will consider my…… [Read More]

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Rutgers Admission the Choice of

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There are two courses presented that appear to be very interesting. The first is "special topics in accounting," which addresses ethical concerns. This is very important since accountants need to be ethical persons. The cut and thrust of business sometimes pressures individuals to engage in unethical practices. I believe that this course will assist in unearthing ethical challenges, thus keeping accountants honest. The second course is "current topics in auditing." Auditing is another facet of business that has held my interest, the cutting edge of the discipline will prepare me to engage firms from a very knowledgeable position.

In addition to the strong accounting program, Rutgers provides intellectual guidance for life. Life beyond Rutgers means that it is critical to be an independent thinker. This university fosters independent thinking. Where ever you go in life thinking about a situation from a fresh perspective is necessary. This type of approach is critical for the accounting profession. I think that once you are reasonably intelligent you can learn many professional skills. However, independent thinking is a pivotal habit necessary for success. Independent thinking is not taught or encouraged in many institutions of higher education. Rutgers encourages and advocates divergent thinking. I would…… [Read More]

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Euro Monetary Union the Admission

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The eurozone package is politically more complicated. it's designed to show that 16 nations sharing the euro currency will stand united behind the debts of member nations to stave off a potential crisis of confidence that could damage them all." (Trumbull, 1)

This complexity is underscored by the inherently questionable imperatives of the European Monetary Union. Indeed, one of the core challenges of free trade, globalization and the establishment of intra-continental unions is the inherent difficulty in facing up the inherent incongruity of the aligning markets. The European Union has served as a prime example of this, matching a widely varied set of nations in a single economic pact. The result is that in many contexts, visible distinctions remain even as economic policy is set with the collective in consideration. These distinctions are not necessarily irreconcilable, but under the current structure of the European Monetary Union, they most certainly are. A view into production and retail industries under less than a decade of a one-currency system shows that the gap between member states has defied legislative efforts and control. In a discussion on the legislation impacting the European auto industry in recent years, for instance, it is important to recognize…… [Read More]

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Baetz, J. (2010). Merkel: $1 Trillion Rescue Package Only Buys Time. Atlanta Journal -- Constitution. Online at

Bilefsky, D. (2010). Greece's Stumble Follows a Headlong Rush Into the Euro. The New York Times.

Brouwer, K. (2010). Is it the Euro or the Yugo? MarketWatch.

Greek Embassy. (2007). Greece in the E.U. Embassy of Greece; Washington, D.C.
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Mrs XXX Instructions for Applying for Admission

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Mrs. XXX

Instructions for Applying for Admission into Online Courses at the Saint Xavier University

I recently got accepted into the online graduate program at Saint Xavier University. So far, I find the program convenient not only because it allows me to learn at my own pace, but also because it presents better opportunities to balance between work and school. I think the program could be a viable option for my colleagues who wish to further their studies. This memo provides instructions on the application process for any interested parties.

Please follow the step-by-step instructions below to set up a user account on the university portal.

Click the 'Admissions' tab on the university website

On the pop-up menu, select 'New student Registration'

A summary screen appears requiring you to fill in your personal information, including your full names, email address, telephone number and date of birth. Fill these, and click the 'Submit' tab

Result: You will immediately receive a text message notifying you that your account has been successfully created on the online student portal; and that your username and password have been sent to the email you provided

4. Log in to your email and follow the link provided.…… [Read More]


Hoffman, J. (2002). Physiological Aspects of Sport Training and Performance. Champaign, IL: Human Kinetics
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Interest in Accounting

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Admissions: Accounting

'Oh you won't be able to do that," she told me. "I tried all morning." I looked askance at her, wanting so badly to come right out and say, "Oh yeah? Watch me!" I kept my mouth shut, though. She didn't that as a personal affront; it was true. I knew that our new payroll software was full of glitches and that it caused everyone in the office to want to throw their computers out of the window. I didn't have much time to waste that day, as I was responsible for delivering a set of pension records to the CFO that afternoon; as much as I wanted to prove myself, I couldn't afford to fiddle endlessly with the program. However, I just knew that the solution was right around the corner. If I could figure out how to work with the new software system, I could complete the payroll in less than half the time it usually took. Forging ahead, I read through the manual and help menus, trying each and every solution offered. My pessimistic coworker, seeing that I wasn't giving up, came over to my desk to watch me work. Standing hunched over my terminal,…… [Read More]

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Having a Better Life

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Admission Letter

My entire life, I have strived to be someone who others could rely on and look up to. As a child, I became involved in the Boy Scouts of America. Now, many young men join this group and last a few years before losing interest and choosing another activity. I, however, was determined to achieve the highest rank possible in the organization. In 2002, I achieved my goal and became an Eagle Scout. It was one of the high points in my life because it was a major achievement and I was able to earn it through hard work and diligence.

I apply the same work ethic to all aspects of my life. In everything, I want to work hard and do the best that I can to achieve my goals. I decided early on in life that I would like to work in the field of Criminology. To be successful in this career, a person has to be detail-oriented and willing to work very hard. Sometimes the clues are hard to decipher and attempting to solve the puzzles of crime can be frustrating. So, in order to be successful, a person must have patience and a thirst…… [Read More]

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MBA Admission Recommendation

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admired staff members, Babar Butt, for your MBA program. Babar is a focused, creative problem solver who communicates well with colleagues and customers. We appreciate Babar at Bismil Inc. For his ability to anticipate the needs of customers, organize sales, and motivate staff members.

Bismil Inc. is one of the largest authorized retailers for T-mobile. As a manager for three Bismil Inc. stores, Babar has doubled monthly revenues, and contributed to the overall success of T-mobile in the region.

One of Babar's greatest strengths as a store manager is his ability to quickly internalize characteristics of new product lines, and to anticipate customers' needs. He then articulates product selling points and trains his team to present the products in exciting ways. He also shows unusual intuition of various markets, and a seemingly infinite amount of creative ideas.

As a business planner, Babar's attention to detail is impeccable, and his organization skills admirable. He consistently impresses the staff with new ways to organize sales and present products. He leads sales staff through presentation simulations, helping them to gain confidence and present products accurately, while focusing on advantages. Babar's methods have also positively influenced other Bismil Inc. locations, as they observe his…… [Read More]

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Parent Statement Private School Admission

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Former president, John F. Kennedy, one said 'ask not what society can do for you, but what you can do for society with the little you have'. Well, XXX is definitely not the only eleven-year-old looking to be considered for a place in your school, in fact there may be dozens of other applicants who are more academically sound, more brilliant, or even more outstanding performers -- but what sets XXX apart from them all is his determination to make things happen with whatever resources are available, and how he gains so much fulfillment from making an impact in other people's lives. He currently plays soccer in a private club team in striker position and it amazes me how he always dedicates his goals and trophies to his team members, and how he strongly believes that although he did most of the scoring, it was all possible because the rest of the team believed in him, and because everyone played their role to the best of their ability, without the expectation that someone else would do the hard work for them.

His love for the game has nurtured in him the concepts of sharing, cooperation and fairness. I was surprised…… [Read More]

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MBA Admission

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Talents aren't things developed. One is born with talent -- a natural propensity for accuracy and efficiency in particular tasks. A knack for a certain intellectual task. Skills, on the other hand, are things learned, practiced, and known; they're the result of schooling, training, and experience. I believe that skills can be thought of, in a sense, as the theory behind reality. In other words, skills are most appropriately consolidated and built upon one's talents, and one excels at his profession when he marries the two. Conversely, one is pushed into mediocrity when she doesn't use her skills to flex her talents.

I've done the opposite. Through my formal education and my three years of experience as a retail manager at T-Mobile after graduation, I've built my skills -- creating innovative solutions to traditional problems, strong leadership capabilities, and customer care -- upon my talent -- business intuition. In other words, I consistently pursue skills that I know will enhance my natural ability to discern the correct path and make sound business decisions that will take my company to more profitable levels.

What, then, might be the best path for me to choose, if I wish to build upon what…… [Read More]

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MBA Admission

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pursued my undergraduate degree in Accounting at the American University of Sharjah in the United Arab Emirates, I experienced a revelation: that success is within my reach, and if I can achieve prosperity despite the obstacles placed before me, then anyone with a blend of luck, desire, and character can do the same. Of course the luck aspect is what makes life unfair; the painful reality that no matter how hard some people work they will not have the necessary opportunities or innate talents necessary to achieve their dreams. This was an especially significant realization because of my unique global journey, and the fact that my brand of luck came from the most important person in my life -- my Mother.

When I was a (high school?) student in a tiny town in Pakistan, my Mother gave me the great honor of choosing to gamble her entire life savings on my college education. This decision was more significant in light of the fact that my Father had died of a heart attack when I was just ? years old, leaving my Mother a single parent; furthermore, I was to be the first in our family fortunate enough to travel abroad…… [Read More]

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Evidence Admission and Suppression

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Admissibility of Evidence at Trial

If the goal for a trial is the search for justice, why should there be rules that limit a juror's ability to render a verdict only to that information gathered in compliance with the Constitution and approved by the judge?

Part of the search for justice is making sure that the evidence admitted at trial satisfies the constitutional criteria distinguishing admissible evidence from inadmissible evidence. In large part, the rules of evidence in a criminal trial are expressly designed to protect the constitutional rights of persons suspected of criminal activity by the police. If there were no such rules, it would be difficult if not impossible to control the ways that police secured evidence on the street. In fact, prior to the modern era of American criminal justice, police routinely arrested suspects without probable cause, deprived them of counsel, food, water, and bathroom facilities, and even beat them to obtain confessions that were later used to convict those defendants at trial (Schmalleger, 2010).

To understand the reason that jurors may not hear evidence unless that evidence meets the requirements established by The Constitution and by applicable case precedents, it is helpful to focus on the…… [Read More]


Schmalleger, F. (2010). Criminal Justice Today: An Introductory Text for the 21st

Century. New Jersey: Prentice Hall.

Zalman, M. (2008). Criminal Procedure: Constitution and Society. New Jersey: Prentice

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Personal Statement for Admission Into Nurse Practitioner Program

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Personal Statement Application for the Nurse Practitioner Program at UCSF

I first experienced the duties of a nurse practitioner in WHATEVER, a small mountain village in Nepal.

From 1996-1998, I worked as a Community Health Volunteer with the American Peace Corps. During those two years, I worked with Nepalese women and children, teaching classes on first aid, family planning and nutrition. I also organized immunization clinics, ran a health library, and conducted community needs assessments.

I have always found great fulfillment in healthcare and in being part of people's recoveries. For this reason, I majored in Kinesiology and Biology at the University of Minnesota, even working towards an application to the Physician Assistant program during my last two years. After graduation, I worked as a nursing assistant.

Since then, I have also gained greater familiarity with pharmaceuticals and the managed healthcare system in my present work with the Daiichi Corporation.

Working as a Peace Corps Volunteer in Nepal, however, has significantly broadened my perspective on health and patient needs.

In the United States, many people equate healthcare with getting treatment when one is sick. However, there is much more to health than the occasional shot, prescription pill or worse, surgery.…… [Read More]