Advertising
Example 1. The two ads are both targeted towards women and appeared in fashion magazines. The visuals for this ad reflect the transition from prickly to smooth, which mirrors the copy. The ad was placed in Glamour, which has a more lifestyle approach, so the food metaphors seem apropos for the audience. The ad is a bit disjointed, in that the image is a bit sloppy and the metaphors in the text seem weak, like the allusion to spaghetti straps, which makes sense and at the same time is a clumsy attempt to tie food into this. All told, however, the ad engages the audience, attempts to be clever, and the visual should catch the attention of readers.
Ad "B" was placed in Cosmo, which skews younger and more strictly fashion-oriented, but the copy and visuals do not seem congruent with that. The layout of the ad is the same as with "A," but the image is not striking. It is all white, and is much blander. The visual does not convey the sense of transition that the visual in "A" does. Neither does the copy. It is not even attempting to be clever, so there is nothing to catch the eye or attention of the target market. The copy conveys the product benefit, but without the benefit of cleverness or a catchy visual, it seems reasonable to think that "B" is simply too conservative for its publication. For these reasons, "A" should have tested better.
Example 2.
The first ad "A" for the Hyundai Sonata is a relatively dry ad. The copy simply recounts the features of the product, without any link to the customer, so there is simply no meaningful customer engagement with this. The tagline is an allusion to the visual, where the car is driving past a movie theatre with a sequel name on its marquee. Arguably, this takes the eye away from the car, and the tagline reinforces that. Despite the copy touting the re-design of this car, the layout of the visual takes your eyes away from the car, minimizing the reader's ability to evaluate the re-design. This ad seems a little too soft, and conventional for the Men's Health demo, and without any lifestyle story to sell, the ad simply does not...
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