Grammar Word Choices Richard, Who

Grammar

Word Choices

Richard, who had never flown before, was frightened as he looked at the big plane on the runway.

Courtney thought that Richard's reaction was unnecessary/overblown/exaggerated.

Despite her impatience, she embraced Richard, exuding compassion and reassurance.

"Don't worry," she said, "the flyer is an expert and a professional, and airplane accidents are rare"

Richard thought that Courtney's communication skills needed improvement.

He felt that her soothing words lacked meaning.

Ultimately Richard and Courtney moved past their communication problem and boarded the plane hand in hand.

Conciseness

Albert was frustrated with being unemployed and threatened by eviction. Although he insulted the head of the pharmacy Freda Waltzman, she ultimately hired him based on his strong physics background. Albert was relieved.

Sentence Structure

In spite of the hoards of tourists, Prague remains the most romantic city in Europe. Prague is smaller and quainter than Paris. Yet its architecture and history is every bit as extraordinary as Paris's. Although the food in Paris far surpasses that of Prague, the Czech city offers something Paris does not: fresh beer. Czech beer is cheap and ubiquitous in Prague. Sold in kiosks on nearly every street corner, beer is part of the daily diet in Prague. Czech beer is world-renown and may be dark or light. Tourists will not tire of exploring Prague's nooks and crannies with the promise of fresh beer in every bar. Prague also boasts a world-class public transportation system. With its splendid hilltop castle, its evocative art nouveau decor, and picturesque riverside setting, Prague is a magical destination.

Part a: Commas

Fortunately, Albert's determination has not been erased. He knows that yes, his work experience is of questionable value in the real world, but that won't stop him! The voice of his mother, who died recently, seems to be urging him forward: "Don't be pessimistic, Al. Whenever the going gets rough we have to put our noses to the grindstone!" That voice, its enthusiasm never waning, shields Albert from despair.

Part B: Semicolon

1) Driving in a rainstorm is always stressful; driving in a blizzard can be terrifying.

2) it was rainy and very chilly outside, but Marina decided to walk to work anyway.

3) in what seemed like a paradox to him, David was afraid of heights; however, he liked to fly.

4) Train travel isn't just for the faint of heart; it is also for those who enjoy the beauty of unfolding landscapes.