Concept Maps and Peer Assessment for Student Learning
This paper, written from the perspective of an experienced English teacher presenting at a professional development session, examines two student assessment tools: Concept Mapping (Mind Mapping) and Peer Assessment. The author demonstrates Concept Mapping through a personal example, showing how students can use it to identify and overcome self-imposed barriers to achievement. Peer Assessment is presented through holistic rubric grading, with students reviewing one another's writing against structured criteria. Drawing on Janesick's framework for authentic assessment, Dempsey and O'Sullivan's concept mapping research, and Robert Bly's social observations, the paper argues that both tools generate richer insight into student progress than traditional methods alone.
- Introduction: Assessment Beyond Traditional Methods: Teacher-trainer introduces two non-traditional assessment tools
- Concept Mapping as an Assessment and Learning Tool: Personal concept map models student barrier identification
- Applying Concept Maps in the Classroom: Students map obstacles to achievement and self-evaluate
- Peer Assessment and Authentic Learning: Janesick's authentic assessment framework applied to peer review
- Holistic Grading and the Peer Review Rubric: Eight-point holistic rubric guides peer reviewer feedback
- Reflections from the Training Session: Participants share experiences and generate workshop ideas
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What makes this paper effective
- The author grounds abstract assessment theory in concrete classroom practice, using a personal concept map as a live demonstration that models vulnerability and invites student engagement.
- Each tool — Concept Mapping and Peer Assessment — is explained both theoretically (citing Janesick, Dempsey, and O'Sullivan) and procedurally, giving readers a replicable framework.
- The inclusion of an actual rubric grid with score descriptors adds practical specificity rarely found in reflective practitioner papers.
Key academic technique demonstrated
The paper exemplifies practitioner inquiry — a teacher-researcher reflecting on their own pedagogy and presenting evidence-informed practice to peers. By narrating what happened during the training session alongside citations that validate the approach, the author bridges personal experience and academic literature effectively.
Structure breakdown
The paper opens with a framing introduction that situates the author as both practitioner and trainer. It then devotes separate sections to Concept Mapping (theory, personal demonstration, classroom application) and Peer Assessment (authentic assessment criteria, holistic rubric, peer reviewer process). It closes with brief reflections from participants and free-association ideas generated at the session's conclusion. The reference list follows APA-adjacent formatting.
Introduction: Assessment Beyond Traditional Methods
During a training session with early-career teachers, I shared practices in effective student assessment that had worked for me throughout a successful career teaching English at both the high school and college levels. Two assessment tools — the Concept Map (also called Mind Mapping) and Peer Assessment — provided me, as teacher, with insights into student progress that could not have been gained through more traditional methods of assessment.
Concept Mapping as an Assessment and Learning Tool
In presenting the Concept Map, I utilized the technique of sharing a personal experience. I have found this produces a non-confrontational atmosphere — the teacher opens up and shares something personal that may, in the long run, prove genuinely beneficial to students as well.
Throughout my career, the profession of teaching has shared space in my private goals with that of writing. Yet I have spent double, if not triple, the number of hours on teaching and teaching preparation compared to preparing manuscripts for submission to publishers. The concept I wanted to explore was: why is this? What is stopping me from writing more? A listing of personal impediments produced the following concept map, with "The Writer" at the center and connected barriers including: No Time, No Ideas, No Workspace, Old Computer, and Myriad Occupations.
Applying Concept Maps in the Classroom
As we reviewed the linked impediments to my central goal of becoming a more active writer, the students were quick to see that each one was essentially an excuse. Were I to apply some discipline to each area, the impediments would disappear.
What if students applied the same mapping process to impediments preventing them from earning that coveted "A" on each quiz or test? What might be stopping them in their tracks? Some rough but very interesting concept maps resulted. A bright young woman added a strategic connection: she noted that students had already included self-evaluation letters in their portfolios, and that concept mapping was simply a more concise way of assessing individual intellectual progress in any given area of study. An "Aha" moment followed as everyone retrieved those letters and began to simplify their thinking through concept mapping.
In their application of Concept Mapping for instruction and assessment, Dempsey and O'Sullivan describe maps as prime tools for discerning what students are actually learning, as well as for consolidating concepts and the relationships among them. The maps can be subject-specific; for example, O'Sullivan devised the following process for a course on Planetary Climate Change:
References
Bly, Robert. The Sibling Society. (1996). New York: Addison-Wesley Publishing Company.
Dempsey, Dave, & O'Sullivan, Kathleen. Concept Mapping Consolidation. Retrieved March 18, 2011, from
Examples of Criteria Types for Use in Rubrics. Retrieved March 18, 2011, from http://www.relearning.org/resources.
Janesick, Valerie J. The Assessment Debate: A Reference Handbook. (2001). California: ABC-CLIO, Inc.
Nevers, Frederic. Peer Review: A Powerful Assessment Tool. Retrieved March 18, 2011, from http://www.iteachwithmoodle.com.
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