School Size, School Type, and Adolescent Mental Health
This reaction paper summarizes and responds to Tammy Watt's 2003 sociological study on school organization and adolescents' emotional adjustment. Watt analyzed data from the National Longitudinal Study of Adolescent Health to assess how school size and sector — private versus public — relate to three mental health indicators: depression, suicide attempts, and violent behavior. The paper summarizes Watt's key findings, which challenge the conventional assumption that small and private schools benefit students academically and emotionally. It then offers a personal response evaluating the plausibility of Watt's explanations, drawing on firsthand observations from attending both small and large Catholic schools, and reflects on how the study provides a scientific framework for understanding adolescent identity formation and social belonging.
- Overview of Watt's Study: Research questions, methodology, and study design
- Key Findings on Emotional Adjustment: Depression, suicide, and violence results by school type
- Response to Study Findings: Critical evaluation of Watt's explanations and logic
- Personal Experience with School Size: Firsthand observations from small and large Catholic schools
- Reflection and Understanding: How study validated personal observation of adolescent experience
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What makes this paper effective
- The paper cleanly separates three distinct intellectual tasks — summary, critical response, and personal reflection — giving readers a clear sense of how the student is engaging with the source at multiple levels.
- The personal anecdote about transferring between a small and a large Catholic school is used to validate, not replace, the scholarly argument, demonstrating appropriate use of lived experience as supporting evidence.
- The student engages critically with Watt's logic, noting why her explanations are "especially plausible" rather than simply accepting conclusions at face value.
Key academic technique demonstrated
The paper demonstrates effective source synthesis and evaluation: the student accurately paraphrases Watt's methodology, identifies the study's independent variables, and then moves beyond summary to assess explanatory plausibility. This shows the ability to distinguish between what a study found and why those findings make sense — a hallmark of analytical academic writing at the undergraduate level.
Structure breakdown
The paper is organized into four labeled sections following a standard reaction-paper format: a study overview covering research questions and methodology; a summary of key findings; a personal critical response evaluating Watt's explanations; and a reflection section connecting personal observation to scientific understanding. The conclusion calls for further research, mirroring Watt's own closing argument. This scaffolded structure keeps summary and analysis clearly distinct.
Overview of Watt's Study
Watt's article explores the connection between school organization and adolescents' mental health. There is a commonly held belief that adolescents receive a superior educational and interpersonal experience in private schools and small schools. Watt cites studies by Coleman and others that have given support to the perceived superiority of private schools. Coleman's findings in support of private schools did not, however, address mental health; they were instead limited to academic achievement.
Watt's questions — "Are private schools better not only for academic achievement but for mental health? Are small schools associated with broad indicators of emotional well-being?" (2003, p. 345) — form the basis for her study. Watt's study addresses these issues by examining three indicators of adolescents' emotional adjustment: depression, suicide attempts, and violent dispositions.
Watt's study analyzed data collected by the National Longitudinal Study of Adolescent Health, which surveyed health-related behaviors of adolescents in grades 7–12. The survey measured depression using the "feelings scale," consisting of 19 questions that addressed how often adolescents felt sad, depressed, lonely, fearful, and so forth. The survey measured suicidality by number of suicide attempts and measured violence by a question about the use or threat of use of a weapon.
The study was designed to examine multiple indicators of mental health because males and females often exhibit distress in different ways — externalized versus internalized. Watt justified the study design by citing a study by Pearlin that found that "females tend to internalize their stress and become depressed, while males tended to externalize their stress and become aggressive" (2003, p. 349).
Key Findings on Emotional Adjustment
Watt's study also took into account independent variables such as school characteristics, socioeconomic status, community and neighborhood influences, intact family status, and peer relations. With respect to depression, her results showed that males who attend small schools have higher levels of depression than males attending large schools, while school size had no effect on females' depression levels. The study also found that males who attend small schools were almost four times more likely to have attempted suicide in the past year than were males who attended large schools, while school size and sector did not affect female suicide attempts. The study showed that both males and females who attended private religious schools were more likely to have used or threatened to use a weapon in the past year.
Overall, the study did not support arguments that private schools and small schools were beneficial to adolescents' emotional adjustment, finding instead that they may actually be detrimental to adolescents' mental health. Watt explained this observation by noting that the unique needs of adolescents as they struggle to construct an identity are more easily met in large and/or public schools.
Watt concluded the article by citing several studies that show evidence of a relationship between school size and academic accomplishment, which have been used to determine governmental and educational policy. These studies did not, however, investigate a relationship between school size and mental health. Watt's study suggests that policy choices in favor of small and/or private schools may not "necessarily be conducive to emotional adjustment and, in some cases, may actually be harmful to adolescents' mental health" (2003, p. 364). She calls for additional research because "we need to know whether choices that are conducive to emotional stability are at odds with those that promote academic achievement" (2003, p. 364).
Works Cited
Watt, T. T. (2003). Are small schools and private schools better for adolescents' emotional adjustment? Sociology of Education, 76(4), 344–367.
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