Major Risk Factors for Obesity: A Research Literature Critique
This paper critiques recent research literature on the major risk factors for obesity, a condition the World Health Organization links to 2.8 million deaths annually. Drawing on four empirical studies, the paper examines how racial and ethnic disparities, socioeconomic status (SES), and the neighborhood built environment — including access to fast food, walkability, and proximity to parks — interact to shape obesity prevalence among adults and children in the United States. The critique evaluates each study's methodology, sample characteristics, and generalizability, ultimately arguing that SES and race are stronger predictors of obesity than walkability alone. The paper concludes by proposing prospective, longitudinal research designs and community-level nursing interventions aimed at reducing obesity-related health disparities.
- Introduction: Global obesity statistics, definitions, and study rationale
- Literature Review: Four studies on race, SES, and built environment
- Critique of the Studies: Methodological strengths and weaknesses evaluated
- Implications for Nursing Interventions and Future Research: Proposed interventions and future research designs
- References: Full APA citations for all sources
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What makes this paper effective
- The paper synthesizes four empirical studies coherently, tracing consistent findings across different populations, cities, and study designs to build a cumulative argument about SES and race as dominant obesity predictors.
- The critique section directly evaluates methodological weaknesses — such as the absence of a comparison group in Michael et al. (2014) and the limited demographic scope of that cohort — rather than simply summarizing findings.
- The paper connects the literature review to actionable recommendations, bridging research evidence and nursing practice by proposing specific intervention and study designs.
Key academic technique demonstrated
The paper demonstrates integrative literature critique: rather than reviewing each study in isolation, it explicitly compares studies to one another (e.g., noting how Lim & Harris corroborate Michael et al., and how Pruchno et al. align with both), creating a chain of evidence that reinforces the central argument about structural determinants of obesity.
Structure breakdown
The paper opens with global and U.S. obesity statistics to establish stakes, then moves into a literature review organized thematically around built environment, SES, race, and food access. A dedicated critique section evaluates the methodological strengths and weaknesses of the reviewed studies. The paper closes by connecting findings to nursing practice and proposing future research designs, including prospective longitudinal cohort studies and community-level interventions.
Introduction
The World Health Organization (WHO, 2013) estimated that close to 1.4 billion adults were overweight in 2008, and of these, 500 million were obese. For adults over the age of 20, this implies that 35% and 11% of the global adult population were overweight and obese, respectively. The definition of overweight is a body mass index (BMI) of 25 or higher, while obesity is defined as a BMI of 30 or higher. While obesity does not directly cause death, it is the fifth leading mortality risk globally and is responsible for 2.8 million deaths annually. This is because obesity represents a significant risk factor for serious comorbid conditions, including diabetes and cardiovascular disease. Accordingly, nearly 20% of U.S. healthcare spending is associated with obesity and obesity-related comorbidities (Ladabaum, Mannalithara, Myer, & Singh, 2014).
Aside from the devastating health consequences of obesity, the number of adults and children suffering from this condition has doubled (WHO, 2013) and tripled (Sample, Carroll, Barksdale, & Jessup, 2013), respectively, since the 1980s. The emergence of the adult and childhood obesity epidemic has motivated researchers and healthcare policymakers to search for common risk factors that can be addressed through policy changes at the national, local, and organizational levels. This report examines the findings of recent research as a way to understand how nursing interventions could improve the health outcomes of people at risk for, or suffering from, obesity.
Literature Review
One of the primary concerns of health policymakers is the role of racial, ethnic, and economic disparities in determining the prevalence of obesity and associated comorbid conditions (Gaskin et al., 2013). The Patient Protection and Affordable Care Act of 2010 is expected to provide some relief; however, this legislation alone cannot eliminate health disparities (Leong & Roberts, 2013). What is needed is a greater understanding of the factors that contribute to health disparities so that interventions can be implemented, especially in light of the growing racial and ethnic diversity in the United States (Cooper, 2012).
Among the factors increasingly recognized as contributing to health disparities is the relationship between obesity and the neighborhood built environment. Most studies to date have employed a cross-sectional design, but Michael and colleagues (2014) sought to improve the quality of the research by examining the impact of a 14-year neighborhood improvement project on resident health indicators for the City of Portland, Oregon, using a retrospective cohort study design. In order to control for the demographic variables of race and ethnicity, only Caucasian, non-Hispanic older women with a mean age of 72.6 (± 5.5 years) were included in the study (N = 2,003). The primary independent variables were bus density, distance to transit, intersection density, and distance to a commercial area, which collectively contributed to a walkability score. In addition, the availability of parks and green space, along with neighborhood socioeconomic status (nSES), were examined. The dependent variable was BMI. Improvements in neighborhood walkability and parks were not predictive of BMI scores, but the demographic variables of age, comorbidity, mobility disability, tobacco use, and nSES were. In addition, education and a history of manual labor were predictive of baseline BMI. While there was a non-significant decline in BMI over the period in relation to walkability and parks, this slight change could not be distinguished from naturally occurring reductions in BMI due to aging and increased frailty.
The study by Michael and colleagues (2014) revealed that improvements in the neighborhood built environment probably play a minor role in determining obesity prevalence compared to SES. They found that higher SES was correlated with a healthier BMI at baseline and over time. These findings support those of Lim and Harris (2014), who examined data obtained through three distinct surveys of New York City neighborhoods (N ≈ 10,000 adults over the age of 18). Among the independent variables found to be predictive of obesity prevalence were race/ethnicity, age, gender, native- or foreign-born status, education, SES, neighborhood walkability, and neighborhood diversity (p < .001). Among these variables, neighborhood diversity and neighborhood poverty were explored in greater depth. When compared to non-Hispanic Whites and after controlling for all known and suspected confounding variables, being African-American or Hispanic increased the risk of obesity by 60% and 30%, respectively. The inter-individual obesity prevalence due to neighborhood variables was almost entirely explained by the percentage of African-American residents, while neighborhood walkability contributed only a small percentage. The authors concluded that SES explains some of the association between obesity and the independent variable "African-American neighborhood percentage," but the greatest contributor to this finding was deemed to be structural differences in the built environment, such as the density of fast food establishments.
The conclusion reached by Lim and Harris (2014) is in agreement with the findings of Pruchno and colleagues (2014), who discovered that obesity was significantly predicted by the prevalence of neighborhood fast food retailers, convenience stores, bars, and small grocers (p < .001), but not by supermarkets. Since childhood overweight and obesity is a significant risk factor for adult obesity (Goldschmidt, Wilfley, Paluch, Roemmich, & Epstein, 2013), the impact of the built environment on child obesity rates is also of interest to researchers and health policymakers. Accordingly, a recent cross-sectional observational study found a significant correlation between adolescent (N = 706) perceived walking distance to food outlets and daily amounts of sugar-sweetened beverage (p < .01) and fast food (p < .05) consumed (Hearst, Pasch, & Laska, 2012). The most convenient source of unhealthy, high-calorie foods was convenience stores, followed by coffee shops, fast food restaurants, and supermarkets. A 10-minute walk was found to be too short to provide significant protection against increased consumption of sugar-sweetened beverages and fast foods.
The results of Hearst and colleagues (2012) suggest that the easy availability of supermarkets is not protective against an unhealthy diet for adolescents. In support of these findings, Shier and colleagues (2012) conducted an observational cohort study tracking BMI from fifth to eighth grade (longitudinal) for a representative U.S. national sample (N = 6,260). The BMI data were compared against geographic data (cross-sectional), which provided information about various types of food outlets, including convenience stores, fast food restaurants, and supermarkets. Overall, the strongest predictor of a higher BMI by eighth grade was access to more than one type of food outlet (p = .005); however, access to food outlets was not predictive of BMI change from fifth to eighth grade. This was a nationally representative sample, so minorities represented less than 40% of the sample and the SES bell curve centered on lower middle-class families (median annual income = $49,022). The relevant protective covariates were spending less time watching television and belonging to a higher income level.
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